Pesky -ing phrases

Handle with Care:  “-ing” Modifiers Verbal phrases like “noting the snake’s distinctive red on yellow” or “knifing through the water” can perform astonishing feats in the dramatization of our stories or, if we aren’t careful, can stand out like spinach on the teeth of our syntax and mark us as writers who have not mastered our …

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